Wednesday, January 19, 2011

“Animal Farm” Revolution at SPA

If the San Pasqual Academy had an Animal revolution their would be a lot of problems because of the animals and alot of the kids would want to slaughter they animals that took over the academy. I would just stay in my house and to prevent that I would probably feed them every day, and keep them from starving because that is Animal cruelty and that wouldn't be nice if we were animals and they were the humans.

3 comments:

  1. Aryon, please read and follow directions carefully. This paragraph lacks third-person narration and is not two hundred words. ):

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  2. Aryon nice job on doing your homrwork but this is not in third person.

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  3. Aryon!! He's so cute!!! You should name him pilow lewis!!!

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