First Persuasive Paragraph

Students should be given free cell phones because it helps students keep in contact with family members. The reason why students should be given free cell phones is because they can be  less annoying to staff that think that  their students annoying but when you are on your phone 24/7 it's kinda not smart because you"ll lose your minutes and when you run out of minutes you have to pay for your own bill. So if you ever use a phone try not to use all your minutes because if that happens you are partically from using your phone and then you wont get to know important updates because you run out of minutes.