It is a good comparison essay, but it is hard to read because it is so small. Over all it is good.
This is really good, I liked your theme, but you weren't supposed to embed it silly!!!")
This is a great essay, but you should make your text box bigger. Great theme comparison.
I really enjoyed youe essay but I agree with Jojo it was hard to read.
I was looking for your final draft to leave a comment, but this post is titled "First Draft." Is this your final draft? Please copy and paste the text instead of just embedding it. It will make it easier to read.
It is a good comparison essay, but it is hard to read because it is so small. Over all it is good.
ReplyDeleteThis is really good, I liked your theme, but you weren't supposed to embed it silly!!!")
ReplyDeleteThis is a great essay, but you should make your text box bigger. Great theme comparison.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed youe essay but I agree with Jojo it was hard to read.
ReplyDeleteI was looking for your final draft to leave a comment, but this post is titled "First Draft." Is this your final draft? Please copy and paste the text instead of just embedding it. It will make it easier to read.
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