Essay Reflective Paragraph

The three things that I did was that I scored the winning goal for my soccer team, I played hard for them, and I also led them to the state championship. The three things I could do differently is grammar,Punctuation, make the story strong from beginning,middle, and the end. The way Mrs. Priester came help me become a better writer is by making sure my story is proofread, spell check, grammar and quotations for me to get a better grade in this class.