Not bad, good job little man.
Aryon this story is'nt bad at all but where you wrote "we deserved to the playoffs" you should add go to because it would sound better.
This is a really good story for you I liked it nice job.
That sounds like fun
Hey I actually like your story. It was really good. It sounds very intresting.
Not bad, good job little man.
ReplyDeleteAryon this story is'nt bad at all but where you wrote "we deserved to the playoffs" you should add go to because it would sound better.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good story for you I liked it nice job.
ReplyDeleteThat sounds like fun
ReplyDeleteHey I actually like your story. It was really good. It sounds very intresting.
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