Friday, October 1, 2010
Autobiographical Narrative - Prewriting - Memorable Days
The one out of the ten most memorable days of my life were when I went sea world with my brother. The second one is when I won winning penalty kick goal for my soccer team. The third one was when I was going to the Big Bear with all my friends. The fourth one was when I went to go see my sisters again. The fifth one was when my brother and I ran the track meet. The sixth one is when I went to go see the Padres play the Cubs in Field Level seats. The seventh one was when I went to the chargers playoff game. The eighth one was when my dad and I went to the shooting range. The ninth one is when I and my housemates went to a Lakers game. The tenth one was when I started playing varsity basketball and I scored twenty points in the season
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All of your memoriable dates are nice but I actually would like to hear about is the one were you wentto go see your sisters.
ReplyDeleteHey bro I think that you should number the memorable parts in a list. (up to down)
ReplyDeleteAryon, proofread and edit your work before posting it. I suggest asking an adult or upperclassman to help you with that.
ReplyDeleteRead and follow directions carefully. Some of these events are missing conflict (or proper capitalization).
Everyone, from the posts to the comments should proofread. Aryon your list should be revised before posting, but I like it.
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