“Everyday Use" Character to Person Comparison Paragraph.”

In my point of view in vocabulary everyday use is when me and my family had to move because of an argument over me, my brothers and sisters because my mom was worried about us getting beat by my dad because our dad hated us she told me that and he let my mom suffer and plus he wanted to keep the house to himself but that night I had to go to the hospital because I was hit with a wooden bat by my dad I had four scars on my head because of it but our family slept over at our grandma’s house and after that my mom found a new home.